This is quite simply the worst thing I've ever done.
It's an attempt at doing something in the style of Winsor McKay, and it took literally months to get this done, and it's still appaling.
This page is the thing that's kept me blocked for months - I just couldn't get the thing finished, and it's held everything else up. And the end result isn't even a millionth as good as it should have been.
I am never going to do anything in the style of anyone other than myself again - this is just appalingly bad.